Connection with my story
Through of my story, I connected with "Jarmal" character, he is older brother of "Denny". Jarmal is very possessive about for younger brother Denny. Denny is very careless and always left the class in starting and in middle , Denny found dinosaur because he really interested about dinosaurs , how that look , which type that colors and other thing but Jarmal always care Denny please stay here don't go there but Denney didn't listen. I connected Jarmal of when I am in 6th standard so my brother always left the class and went outside and found bird he really like birds and he also want know about birds. And same thing whenever Jarmal said don't go outside so Denny said ,you aren't my boss and same when that time I said with my brother don't go outside he said you aren't my mother so I connected easily with Jarmal character.
So, in school you always kept your eyes on your brother and you didn't let him enjoy. 😄
ReplyDeletePooja, some tiny mistakes were there in sentence structure. So, try to avoid them. 😊
Not bad Pooja👏👏👏it's nice story👌❣️I didn't found any mistake in your story😘👍
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